Human Raptor PK Comic

OK, wanted to see if I could draw a comic-page of sorts and it turns out I can. BTW, all of this is freehand-drawn--no rulers or other straight-edges at any point.

Basic storyline is this--Human!Raptor (the guy) said/did something that affected Human!PK (the girl) negatively, and he feels /real/ guilty about it. This was spawned from something that recently happened at ChibiJaime's MTMTE-RP board--or at least the effect it had after the fact on my Mindspace versions of these characters.

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(basic text boxes even though I didn't technically add any)

Panel 2-- PK: *sighs gently*
Panel 3-- PK: Raptor...?
Panel 7-- Raptor: Huh?!
Panel 9a-- Raptor: How could you... still... after what... I did...?
Panel 9b-- PK: *shhhh's softly*
Panel 10-- PK: I don't love you just because of what you've done--above all, I love you for who you are.

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Cheesy? Maybe. But that's what I sensed from them, so that's what I wrote.